Thursday, November 11, 2010

Avi Sentari

Avi Sentari’s planet was just alienated from civilization by a rogue back hole which catapulted the planet into deep space. The planet and the system are still in tact, but they no longer have contact with earth. Because of this, the power structure within that planet becomes unstable. The central city starts attacking the settlements which now want rights and independence because they are essentially doing all the work. Avi is separated from his parents in a raid, he wanders the desert and comes in contact with one enemy mecha. Just as he is about to die, a strange mecha appears out of the sky and destroys the enemy. And old man comes out and tells avi just one cryptic message. It sends him on a quest for his life, to become a mecha pilot. He knows he must do this. So he grows up on the streets of one of the bigger cities and gets involved with a gang called the Breakers who plan to steal one of the governments newest technologies, a mech. He steals it and betrays the gang by taking I t for himself. The chase, the government first comes after him and he defeats them, the gang comes after him and he defeats them. Then the bounty hunter comes and is committed to taking avi out, not to lunch, but as in dead. The bounty hunter’s mech is superior even to this new model. Avi wins the fight due to luck and has his own mech damaged critically so he is forced to steal the bounty hunter’s mech. While he’s at it, he steals the bounty hunter’s identity and allows the other mech to be completely destroyed as if he died in that fight, sad and unfortunate, but this way nobody would chase after him. He finds a mechanic shop and settles down as that bounty hunter who just wants to make a living. But there is an evil dude in another city making trouble and a bounty goes up that would make him live comfortably forever. So he goes there with his mission to defeat this guy and get the money. He becomes friends with the guy, then later finds out who he is. He ends up killing the guy but not collecting the bounty because that would disrespect him even in the grave, it matters to avi for some reason. He uses the bad guy’s mech and his own to create a new one in his shop, the most ultimate mecha, the one which he saw as a child. So his old gang friend shows up and steals his mech. They use it to defeat the government in their city and basically rule the town. The central government cracks down on them, and that’s when they allow avi to steal the mech back, but now the government forces think he is the once who destroyed the city, so they surround him with the intention of killing him. Leto the Red Lion is the general in charge of the attack. First the Breakers are Ended by his Special Ops. Avi gets away by a hair, He falls into a trap and is surrounded by Leto’s forces it looks like the end is near. Just as Leto is about to defeat Avi in one on one combat, a light appears and a mech comes out of nowhere and interrupts the battle. He sinks the flagship with no effort. This scares Leto, who surrenders for the sake of his men. The strange man in the mech accepts his surrender and allows them to go free disarmed. The strange Mech duels Avi. Avi wins somehow unlocking a previously dormant skill in him, a source of limitless potential. The man comes out of the mech and reveals himself as an older version of Avi himself. He explains that he is Avi, and Avi Sentari is the first time traveler, the first evolution of the human species that can manipulate time manifolds. Older Avi explains to Younger Avi, that the planet is not separated from civilization, but actually inside the event horizon of that rogue black hole, and it is his mission to save the planet, so he is King, King of the Planet who will save them from the impending tidal forces that will eventually rip everything apart.

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